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只看楼主 倒序阅读 使用道具 楼主  发表于: 2011-07-19
                                                            HELLO!XX你好吗?

                                                           最近生活好吗?
                                                           去了大学离开妈妈的身边一切都还好吗?
                                                           在新的环境里还会有时想到我吗?
                                                           你的病是否真的完全都好了吗?
                                                           我们好久没见了
                                                           大概一年没见了
                                                           就连你走的时候也来不及和你说声再见了
                                                           不知道你今年又许下什么了心愿
                                                           希望你努力可以把梦想都全部实现
                                                        
                                                           大连我只能表示无奈
                                                        
                                                           我最近挺好的
                                                           一切都还算是正常
                                                           就是饭量多了点
                                                           可能会有一些营养过胜
                                                           但性格还是那样
                                                           我内心比较坚强
                                                           但遇到困难挫折还会时不时的左右彷徨
                                                           对了《小情歌》好听吗?
                                                           你是否有在听吗?
                                                           如果真的还在听那么就赶紧再告诉我吧
                                                           一起努力吧!
                                                          XX加油吧!
                                                          忘记痛苦的束缚向着希望自由的飞翔吧
                                                      
                                                          快到圣诞了你准备和谁一起过呀?
                                                          烛光丰盛晚餐又打算让谁来做呀?
                                                          OH MY GOD那个高大的男人他是谁是谁
                                                          哎!反正不是我
                                                          我又何苦管他是谁
                                                         你走桃花运到哪都会许多有人陪
                                                         我就不一样了 只能在KTV里唱《SING FOR THE MOMENT》
                                                         反正过去的日子找也找不回
                                                         束手无策的我也只能等待寂寞团团的包围
                                                         关于过去不必再去计较谁错谁对
                                                         有好多事情我们都应该学会宽容面对
                                                        生命因为短暂所以才会显得宝贵
                                                        
                                     几年过去一转眼我们都已经上了大学
                                     原来大学没有想象中的那么悠闲自由
                                     生活很苦使我的整个夜晚无法入睡
                                     还好在我受伤时能够想起你温暖的安慰
                                     我最近有空还是经常会抬头去看曾经的拐子星
                                     可是重庆的天空它总是阴云密布
                                     就像再也看不到你的身影出现在我的身边
                                     现在只剩下我一个人在回忆里寻找昨天
  
                                                          
                                                           你说过喜欢我生活里的那种简单
                                                           你的名字曾经天天都挂在我的嘴边
                                                           闭上眼睛仿佛一切又变的那么的新鲜
                                                           有好多话都讲不出堆积在我的心上
                                                           回想那些岁月都有你和我一起度过
                                                           此时此刻已经不敢去想当初的美好

                                                           XX和灰尘的故事已经被现实改
                                                           你要多注意身体照顾好自己
                                                           本来以为可以在这个时间彻底的沉默

                                                          
                                                            XX,你好吗?
                                                           好久没有你的消息了!
                                                           也不知道你在那边生活的怎么样了。
                                                           照顾好自己,希望你每天都开心!
                                                           对了,如果有时间还记得我的话
                                                           记得打电话给我!
                                                           保重!!!
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